bookblather: Lucy Hale looking back over her shoulder with a smile. (in the heart: Ahava: Lucy Hale)
bookblather ([personal profile] bookblather) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-09-01 11:28 pm

Faded Blue 14: Accidents

Author: Kat
Title: Accidents
Story: In the Heart
Colors: Faded blue 14 (I've had measles and the mumps).
Supplies and Materials: Miniature, canvas (Ahava and Duncan are about seven), seed beads, acrylic (a desire), stickers (peanut allergies), modeling clay (scar), glitter (problem), glue (Be careful because you may be easily misled today by someone you trust. ), novelty beads ("I Will Survive", Gloria Gaynor).
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Summary: Duncan finds out that he's allergic to peanuts the hard way.
Warnings: None.
Notes: I'm not sorry about the novelty beads.


"I'm so sorry," Ahava said, miserably.

Duncan pulled the oxygen mask off his face. "It's not your fault," he rasped, and put the mask back on when a passing nurse looked at him reproachfully.

"I gave you the cookie. I really am sorry, Duncan, I didn't mean..."

He rolled his eyes and pulled the mask off again. "Look, I didn't know I was allergic to peanuts. How were you supposed to?"

"I'm your best friend," she insisted. "I'm not supposed to accidentally poison you."

"No," he said, "you're supposed to do it on purpose," and good, that got a smile.
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[personal profile] isana 2012-09-02 04:53 am (UTC)(link)
Awww. That's totally adorable and sincere (I swear, I'm much older than they are in this piece and still have that sort of guilt about things. agh.)

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[personal profile] finch 2012-09-02 08:42 am (UTC)(link)
Ouch. For both of them. Good job capturing a lot in that 100 words.
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[personal profile] settecorvi 2012-09-02 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
You always create such rich scenes and interactions in just 100 words. Aww at Duncan taking the energy and oxygen to joke Ahava out of her misery while recovering from (I'm guessing) anaphylaxis.
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[personal profile] shipwreck_light 2012-09-03 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
"No," he said, "you're supposed to do it on purpose," and good, that got a smile.

This line.

THIS LINE.

And these characters! How can they be so cute and still almost kill each other? That's so awesome!