shadowsong26: (kesshare)
shadowsong26 ([personal profile] shadowsong26) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-06-03 01:42 am

Bone Black #8, TARDIS Blue #7, Eisenhower Green #15

Story: Study
'Verse: Feredar
Colors: Bone Black #8. Rotting, TARDIS Blue #7. No second chances. I'm that sort of a man., Eisenhower Green #15. that's what you get for being made of meat
Supplies and Materials: photography, canvas (976 FY), feathers, fabric, modeling clay, chalk, yarn
Word Count: 161
Rating: R
Characters: Kesshare
Warnings: References to the events of Sending a Message.
Notes: Constructive criticism welcome, as always. Well, this turned out hella weird.



Study the room.
Ignore the lingering stench of blood and flesh-smoke
The chilly little crunches at every footstep--
Shards.

Study the patterns,
The pools where she stabbed him,
And where the makeshift daggers from the shattered furniture
Cut her hands.

Study the air.
Breathe it in--the fact that it ended--
It ended so quickly
Too damn quickly

He tried to take something that was not his.
And there is no redress remaining--
No kin to break, no life to take.

Frustrating
Isn't it.
Infuriating.

Turn away--
Crunchclickcrunch--
Go to where
The children are.

They will need repairs.
For what they saw and did
And what was done to them.
But they can be repaired,
And plans can be rewritten
Around the cracks that will remain.

The sickly sweet flesh-smoke
Etches visions of glory
In the patterns
And the shards.

Study the room
The patterns,
The air.

Vengeance--true vengeance--is another thing stolen, but

Victory is one step closer.
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[personal profile] bookblather 2012-06-06 04:02 am (UTC)(link)
I love the... detachment of this, how angry she is, but not at what was done to her children, but at not being able to seek revenge for it. And also, looking at the children as things needing repairs. Nicely done.