Mystic Beach Blue #15, Alice Blue #10, Aqua #1

[shadowsong26]

Name: shadowsong26
Story: As the Sun Is Going Down
'Verse: Feredar
Colors: Mystic Beach Blue #15. this one, Alice Blue #10. life, what is it but a dream?, Aqua #1. Flow
Supplies and Materials: graffiti (Skindiving), fingerpainting (nonet), photography, miniature, frame, oils, fabric, yarn,
Word Count: 37
Rating: G
Characters: Riluke, Kes
Warnings: Nope
Notes: Constructive criticism welcome, as always.


As the sun is going down, we sit
and dream together; it suits us--
you turn your hands, swirling clouds;
while i breathe out the sun.
this border moment,
is perfect; as
the sun is
going
down.

Comments

[bookblather]

I squeed a little bit. The format was a perfect choice.

[shadowsong26]

Thank you ^_^

It did suit them pretty perfectly, yes :D

[shipwreck_light]

Don't mind me, just licking the screen RE: how delicious this poem is...

[shadowsong26]

Thank you #^_^#