Skylight 15 - Salmon 15 - Bichromatic - Tapestry - Miniature - Photography

[dark_kana]

Name: Kana
Title: Captured
Story: Memories once stolen
Characters: Nelly
Colors: Skylight 15 Bars on the windows – Salmon 15 Empty jar
Supplies and Styles: Bichromatic – Tapestry – Miniature - Photography
Word count: 91
Rating: PG
Summary: Nelly in prison
Notes: Constructive criticism is, as always, welcome


Nelly looks outside, sees the sun starting to set. The end of a day. Perhaps the end of everything. Captured by the King. Probably sentenced to death.

She's not afraid to die. Not really. She fears more what they have done to Rafael. And Timmy, her little brother. She couldn't bare thinking they'd torture the two men she loves the most.

Angry she kicks the jar against the wall. Seeing it shatter across the floor. The last drops of water leaking out. It feels like life slipping away through her fingers...

Comments

[lhune]

The last drops of water leaking out. It feels like life slipping away through her fingers...
As always, such a beautiful ending line.

[dark_kana]

:-) Thank you. To be honest, I was pretty happy with this ending as well... ^^;

[bookblather]

Oh, that ending, ouch.

(one piece of concrit: I'd write out "two" instead of putting a number in. It looks more consistent. But that's it!)

[dark_kana]

Thanks!

(Oh, thank you for pointing that out! Normally I always write my numbers out. Must have slipped my mind this time. :p)