ysabetwordsmith: Cartoon of me in Wordsmith persona (Default)
ysabetwordsmith ([personal profile] ysabetwordsmith) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic 2013-10-16 07:12 pm (UTC)

Wow!

This is a brilliant depiction of depression.

I am also deeply intrigued to see you using what amounts to poetic structure in prose, with repetition and division of verses. I haven't seen this done in prose poetry before, but it instantly seems like a great idea for that. I shall have to keep this in mind.
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