Skylight 2 - Salmon 2 - Bichromatic - Tapestry - Miniature

[dark_kana]

Name: Kana
Title: Nightmare
Story: Circle never ends
Characters: Freya, Nick
Colors: Skylight 2. Smell of asphalt - Salmon 2. Worn out shoes
Supplies and Styles: Bichromatic – Tapestry (Miniature)
Word count: 99
Rating: PG
Warnings: Mentions of dead of a friend because of a car-accident.
Summary: Every time, the same nightmare
Notes: Constructive criticism is, as always, welcome


Still the same nightmare. Still waking up screaming. But now Nick's arms are there to comfort her and his lips kiss away the tears.

"Thomas?"

She nods against his shoulder. The image of him lying in the middle of the street, eyes open, is still so... real. It always surprises her that the thing she sees the most clearly, are his running shoes. Worn just a couple of times too much, but he loved wearing them.

And despite waking up, she can still smell the asphalt and the burned rubber of the wheels of the car that hit him.

Comments

[bookblather]

Oh, man. I really like the evocation of the little details here.

[dark_kana]

Thank you! It was hard trying to fit it all within 100 words. *sweatdrop*

[lhune]

Those 99 words really left an impact, they convey so much feeling.

[dark_kana]

Thank you! I must admit, it wasn't easy to try and tell it all in 100words or less... I'm glad you think I managed well :-)