bookblather: (in the heart : joanna : hijab)
bookblather ([personal profile] bookblather) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2013-09-18 12:42 am

Glitter 17, Nile Green 16: Wonderland

Author: Kat
Title: Wonderland
Story: In the Heart
Colors: Glitter 17 (The impossible dream. - Man of La Mancha), nile green 16 (Story of Wenamun) with shadowsong's paint by numbers (Joanna and literary history)
Supplies and Materials: Canvas, fingerpainting (poetry), miniature, watercolors (this image), feathers (Your character feels listless.), glitter (loss), novelty beads (this picture)
Word Count: 59
Rating: G
Summary: Girls who go home.
Warnings: none.
Notes: Presented without comment.


Joanna reads the books they give her—
The Wonderful Wizard of Oz
Alice's Adventures in Wonderland—
girls who click their heels
or wake up
girls who leave the chaos
girls who go home.

And she wears headbands under hijab
paints her favorite sneakers red
and walking home she clicks her heels
one
two
three

but she never gets home.
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[personal profile] shipwreck_light 2013-09-19 03:47 am (UTC)(link)
NEEDS TO COMMENT. ONLY TO BE ENJOYED.

[personal profile] sharpeningthebones 2013-09-19 06:37 am (UTC)(link)
Oh god, I loved this more than I know what to do with.

Wonderful, wonderful job.
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[personal profile] jkatkina 2013-09-20 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
Oh man, no comment needed (she says while commenting). This is excellent, very narrative.

High five for using the medium of poetry in an effective and pleasing way! It's harder than it looks!
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[personal profile] dark_kana 2013-10-01 11:21 am (UTC)(link)
Wow!