Atomic tangerine: (near) extinction

[sharpeningthebones]

Name: Charley
Story: And The Devil Makes Three
Colors: Atomic Tangerine: (near) extinction
Supplies: Eraser, miniature
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Notes: And I have finally finished a color! *spins*


Maybe she's a gone girl, a broken girl, a girl who is nothing but broken pieces.

She's not dead though, she's still got a beating heart and a pulse and breath in her lungs.

Molly tilts her head up to the sky, looking up at the sun. It hurts but she doesn’t care.

She's. Not. Dead. Yet.

She smiles and Annabelle smiles with her. They woudl be holding hands if they could because, in the end, they were the ones who are standing, the sun in their face and the breath in their lungs.

They were the ones who survived.

Comments

[bookblather]

This is great. This is... I'd almost call it a mantra for survivors. I'm not fucking dead yet so don't you treat me like I am. Great job.

[sharpeningthebones]

*ndonod* That's what I kind of feel too. It's not what I intended when I started writing but it's what I feel now that I look back on it.

[dark_kana]

Wow. Wonderfully written!

[sharpeningthebones]

Thank you!

[auguris]

Hoo. I love it.

[sharpeningthebones]

<33333

[settecorvi]

This is really powerful, without being overblown. I love their will to survive, written in every one of the physical details they revel in so fiercely.

[sharpeningthebones]

Thank you so much. I am really pleased with this one, as I know that it could have very easily been overblown but I think it came out all right.

[shipwreck_light]

Mad congrats! And what a way to see your color out. This just makes me want to stand up and go YES. Even though I'm not there. And that's very cool indeed.

[sharpeningthebones]

That is awesome. I am so glad you enjoyed it and just...yes.

[clare_dragonfly]

Yaaaaay ♥

[sharpeningthebones]

<33333 *gnaws on*