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dark_kana ([personal profile] dark_kana) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-10-28 09:05 pm

Cherry blossom pink 24 - True blue 14 - Bichromatic - Miniature - Oils

Name: Kana
Title: Guitar
Story: Circle never ends
Characters: Freya - Nick
Colors: Cherry Blossom Pink 24 Koto - True Blue 14 Sharing
Supplies and Styles: Bichromatic – Miniature – Oils (insight)
Word count: 100
Rating: PG
Warnings: Mentions of cancer and chemo-therapy
Summary: Nick didn’t know she played the guitar.
Notes: Constructive criticism is, as always, welcome



After yet another chemo therapy, when Nick brings Freya home, she takes him to her room. She ignores his questioning look and takes her guitar out of her closet.

“Did you know?”

Nick shakes his head. Carefully taking the instrument out of her hands.

Coughing Freya sets herself on her bed. He brushes some hair behind her ear and sets himself next to her. “I wish I could have seen you play.”

Freya smiles. “Perhaps when I feel a little better again.”

She lets her head rest on his shoulder. Tired.

Looking to the closet her discovers a Japanese Koto.
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[personal profile] bookblather 2012-10-30 03:12 am (UTC)(link)
This is cute, but I think perhaps the end is a little abrupt? Although it does follow on the theme of things Nick didn't know, so it works that way. I don't know.