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dark_kana ([personal profile] dark_kana) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-10-18 05:49 pm

Cotton Candy 2 - Peach 13 - Paint by Numbers - Miniature

Name : Kana
Title : Training
Story : Shadows in the distance
Characters : Caithlynn, Frey
Colors : Cotton Candy 2 Tag - Peach 13 Holy Shipwreck!
Supplies & Styles : Paint By Numbers (from Subluxate : What just happened?) - Miniature
Word Count : 100
Rating :PG
Summary : Frey trains to control the Element Water.
Notes : Constructive criticism is, as always, welcome.

“Concentrate. Feel it. Let the Water flow through you. With you. You and the Water. You are one.”

He closes his eyes. Calling the Water to his hands. Feeling it flow between his fingers. Letting it move between his hands. Letting it swirl around him.

“Now. Pretend you are playing tag. Let it go.”

Frey guides the Water forward. Hitting Caithlynn in the chest. Shocked he looks up when he hears her groan. His eyes wide open when he sees her lying down, ten meters further.

“I think you’ve got it. Keep this in mind and soon you’ll be unstoppable.”
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[personal profile] finch 2012-10-19 01:42 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, Frey's lucky Caithlynn wasn't seriously injured. ;) I like the description of the flowing in the second paragraph.
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[personal profile] bookblather 2012-10-20 12:46 am (UTC)(link)
I think that might've been harder than he meant.