bookblather: Ali Larter with messy hair staring intensely at the camera. (in the heart : yvonne : ali larter)
bookblather ([personal profile] bookblather) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-10-02 02:36 pm

Sulphur 2: Damsels

Author: Kat
Title: Damsels
Story: In the Heart
Colors: Sulphur 2 (Temptation)
Supplies and Materials: Tapestry, charcoal (Yvonne), miniature, acrylic (cage), glitter (Describe your cooking skills.), glue (someone's expectations might not be reasonable now), pastels (flirting), novelty beads (hunter), canvas.
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG.
Summary: Yvonne triumphs.
Warnings: Yvonne.
Notes: Seven villains left!


She cooked for him, charmingly inept, and told him with lowered eyelashes that her mother had thrown her out because of their love. That wasn't true, but he didn't need to know the truth; only what she wanted him to know.

Wasn't that always the way with men? A sweet smile, a flirted smile, a subtle twist of hips and they were putty in her hands. And Hugh was easier than most, so determined to be someone's shining knight.

He took her in, of course, and she rewarded him with a kiss, as distressed damsels did.

She had him now.
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[personal profile] finch 2012-10-02 07:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Warnings: Yvonne.

That sums up so much. She's really good at what she does, though, I have to give her that.
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[personal profile] isana 2012-10-02 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Ugh, yes, Yvonne as a warning is enough. Her remorseless glee makes my skin crawl. Poor Hugh, completely beguiled by her charm.
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[personal profile] malapropism 2012-10-03 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
It is legitimately chilling how blase Yvonne is about winning Hugh. It ends with "she had him now," but it's written like she presumed that to be the natural and rightful outcome. Yvonne is heartless and manipulative and awful, and I am both repulsed and fond of her for it.
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[personal profile] sarcasticsra 2012-10-03 04:18 am (UTC)(link)
I am with [personal profile] malapropism. Yvonne is evil, but in such a fascinating, unrepentant, and competent way that makes you love reading about her. This is a really great showcase of that.

Good job!
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[personal profile] settecorvi 2012-10-04 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
She is a shark in human skin, isn't she. There is something fascinating about watching someone so manipulate the world and its inhabitants to her liking with such calculated competence.
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[personal profile] shipwreck_light 2012-10-04 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
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Well-played, Yvonne. Well-played.