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Geena ([personal profile] geena) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-09-17 08:25 pm

Heart Gold 10

Author: [personal profile] geena
Color: Heart Gold 10. Where there is love there is life. - Gandhi
Styles and Supplies: Acrylic (photo)
Word Count: 373
Rating: PG-13
Story: _____; the title of this story is Westward.
Summary: They have their small escapes.
Notes: This takes place before Jason. Trigger warnings for sexual abuse and child abuse.

***

He comes to her at night, her father-- or rather, the man she knows as her father, though she has her doubts. Her mother certainly does.

His mother left at night, though he hardly remembers it. The bastard does, if his drunken ravings can be trusted, and he takes the brunt of the blame.

These are the essentials.

***

It rains.

Scraping his knee as he crawls through her window, he hisses a curse. She glares, lips pursed, and pulls him tight against her.

"Am I late?"

She shakes her head.

"Where is he?"

"Out. I don't know." Swallowing hard, she averts her gaze. "I don't care. Can we go?"

"The car's around the block."

She demands, "West this time."

"Does it matter?" he asks rhetorically.

They are on the road within fifteen minutes.

***

"Did he..."

She winces.

"I'll kill him."

"You won't."

He grips the steering wheel as she lights her first cigarette. "I know where my dad keeps the gun. I could."

"He'd kill you," she grinds out. "I couldn't handle-- stop talking."

They don't speak for twenty-six minutes.

***

"That's a fresh one. The bruise."

He narrows his eyes. "Is this your revenge?"

"Even if it is," she remarks, fiddling with the radio, "the point stands. What was it this time?"

"I think I breathed."

"Typical."

***

"Where are we?" she asks, blinking awake.

"Maybe Nebraska?" His eyes are bloodshot, glassy.

"I like it. It's flat. Empty."

"Christ, you're philosophical at dawn."

"It's my curse." She straightens, waving at a sign announcing a rest stop. "Turn there. You're dead on your feet."

"I'm fine," he protests.

"Well I'm not. Stop here."

They pull into the parking lot five minutes later, car creaking in complaint as the engine dies down. It takes another few minutes to spread out the blankets from the trunk, wrapping themselves in the fleece and one another as they cram into the back.

"Let's not go back," she whispers against his neck.

"We have to," he forces out.

***

When they wake, it is without a word. The blankets are returned, the seats readjusted, and the ignition turned over.

He presses on the gas. She lights a cigarette. They drive east in silence.

They drive home.

***
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[personal profile] shipwreck_light 2012-09-18 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
I remain in awe of your ability to get so much into such a little space.

This is less than 400 words.

I couldn't have gotten this out in 4000.

Or had it come out this perfect.
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[personal profile] subluxate 2012-09-18 03:14 am (UTC)(link)
Well that's just made of sadness. Damn. So much said in so little.
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[personal profile] kay_brooke 2012-09-18 06:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I feel so bad for both of them, for their broken home lives...there's a part that really hopes they'll just keep going. Maybe someday.
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[personal profile] settecorvi 2012-09-19 01:05 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is lovely like a razor. This is a story pared down to its bare bones, and it tells us all the more for it.

(Your dialogue is amazing.)
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[personal profile] sarcasticsra 2012-09-19 02:16 am (UTC)(link)
Ouch. Jagged and sharp like broken bits of a mirror, reflecting just enough to give us exactly what we need.

Seriously, great job.
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[personal profile] bookblather 2012-09-20 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
oh maaaaan my heart. These two just being together for each other, driving as far as they can just to be together, getting out as much as they can, it breaks my heart. Fabulous job, very spare and sparse. Usually I hate that kind of writing, but yours just has so much... idk, it works.