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rainbowfic2012-09-08 10:49 pm
shadowsong26) wrote in rainbowfic2012-09-08 10:49 pm
Entry tags:
Mellow Yellow #19, Isabelline #1, Electric Purple #4
Name: shadowsong26
Story: Right and Wrong
'Verse: Feredar
Colors: Mellow Yellow #19. Ambiliance, Isabelline #1. You want a hassle-free life? Go get your upper-class wife, Electric Purple #4. Mama says truth is all that matters/Lying and deceiving is a sin/Drifting through a world that's torn and tattered/Every thought I have don't mean a thing (Bryan Ferry- Don't Stop The Dance)
Supplies and Materials: miniature, eraser (generation swap AU), brush (gallant), oils, stain ("The world suffers a lot. Not because of the violence of bad people. But because of the silene of good people." -- Napoleon), modeling clay, charcoal, novelty beads, glitter, glue ("Your key planet, communicator Mercury, often assists you in separating useful data from irrelevant information. However, stress from overpowering Jupiter now can negatively influence your normal orientation toward details. If you're distracted today, your thinking might grow sloppy, especially when you concentrate on the generalities rather than the particulars. Keep your feet on the ground and use your common sense.")
Word Count: 100
Rating: R
Characters: Sorell, Nida
Warnings: References to genocide and character/familial/parental death, dehumanization of mages
Notes: Constructive criticism welcome, as always. This is what happens when I try to Think at work. It takes place in an alternate 980 FY. Could I get a color tag for Electric Purple, please? (And one for Mellow Yellow?)
He stared down at the order. There was right and there was wrong, and this...
"Sorell?"
It couldn’t be right. There had to be limits.
"Sorell."
But there were reasons--good ones that Father shared in council.
"Please look at me."
He turned to Nida. First Mother's death, and now...
"What will you do?"
They're not human. Her death proved the need.
"Sorell?"
He looked down at the paper, then crumpled it and tossed it into the fire.
There was right and there was wrong, and confused though he was, Sorell could never support the wrong his father was committing.
Story: Right and Wrong
'Verse: Feredar
Colors: Mellow Yellow #19. Ambiliance, Isabelline #1. You want a hassle-free life? Go get your upper-class wife, Electric Purple #4. Mama says truth is all that matters/Lying and deceiving is a sin/Drifting through a world that's torn and tattered/Every thought I have don't mean a thing (Bryan Ferry- Don't Stop The Dance)
Supplies and Materials: miniature, eraser (generation swap AU), brush (gallant), oils, stain ("The world suffers a lot. Not because of the violence of bad people. But because of the silene of good people." -- Napoleon), modeling clay, charcoal, novelty beads, glitter, glue ("Your key planet, communicator Mercury, often assists you in separating useful data from irrelevant information. However, stress from overpowering Jupiter now can negatively influence your normal orientation toward details. If you're distracted today, your thinking might grow sloppy, especially when you concentrate on the generalities rather than the particulars. Keep your feet on the ground and use your common sense.")
Word Count: 100
Rating: R
Characters: Sorell, Nida
Warnings: References to genocide and character/familial/parental death, dehumanization of mages
Notes: Constructive criticism welcome, as always. This is what happens when I try to Think at work. It takes place in an alternate 980 FY. Could I get a color tag for Electric Purple, please? (And one for Mellow Yellow?)
He stared down at the order. There was right and there was wrong, and this...
"Sorell?"
It couldn’t be right. There had to be limits.
"Sorell."
But there were reasons--good ones that Father shared in council.
"Please look at me."
He turned to Nida. First Mother's death, and now...
"What will you do?"
They're not human. Her death proved the need.
"Sorell?"
He looked down at the paper, then crumpled it and tossed it into the fire.
There was right and there was wrong, and confused though he was, Sorell could never support the wrong his father was committing.
no subject
I'm not sure I quite follow this, but if I understand correctly, Kellom is Sorrell's father here rather than vice versa? In which case, this is a very nice way of depicting the difference between the two.
no subject
Yes. I haven't worked out all the specifics of the changes in the timeline, but the principle is Kellom and Fera are Sorell's parents. Nida is a generation younger, too.