dark_kana: (writing)
dark_kana ([personal profile] dark_kana) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-08-21 07:49 pm

Sky Blue 9 - Waterspout 1 - Transparent 6 - Miniature - Canvas - Photograpy - Beading Wire

Name: Kana
Title: To the sea
Story: Shadows in the Distance
Characters: Caithlynn
Colors: Sky Blue 9 Gas – Waterspout 1 Ocean – Transparent 6 Bird
Supplies and Styles: Miniature – Canvas – Photography – Beading Wire (http://photography.nationalgeographic.com/photography/photo-of-the-day/)
Word count: 78
Rating: PG
Summary: As a child she was obsessed with the great ocean
Notes: Constructive criticism is, as always, welcome
Last 'Sky Blue' prompt

As a child she was obsessed with the great ocean. Fascinated by the waves. So beautiful and full of force. So dangerous.

But she rarely ever went to the sea. Her mother finding it a pure waste of time and money and gas.

So when she finally steps out of the car - her teddy still clutched against her chest - and she hears the seagulls, she can hardly believe it.

It is the best birthday present ever!
novel_machinist: (Kerith Lomari)

[personal profile] novel_machinist 2012-08-24 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I like the simplistic style to the lines here, it feels like a child is speaking. I would like to see a bit more detail, myself, but the snippit works well as is.
bookblather: A picture of Yomiko Readman looking at books with the text "bookgasm." (Default)

[personal profile] bookblather 2012-08-29 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, the end. This is sweetly childish.