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Geena ([personal profile] geena) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-01-11 05:49 pm

Alice Blue 9

Author: Geena
Colors: Alice Blue 9. everything is funny, if you can laugh at it
Rating: G
Word Count: 174
Story: Polyfaceted (Index~Timeline); the title of this story is An Arrangement.
Summary: Martina learns of yet another girlfriend. (Old prompt from [personal profile] bookblather.)
Notes: This is canon and takes place in 1987. Anything in italics is spoken Italian.

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He tells her after dinner, once the children are upstairs and out of range.

I see. That’s-- you must be very happy.” Martina turns away, wiping the counters for a second time.

Is something wrong?

She almost laughs at the absurdity of his question. “Of course not. How did you meet this one?” A stubborn splash of sauce refuses to come off-- she puts power behind her scrubbing, gritting her teeth.

We met over dinner a few weeks ago. She was alone, so of course I offered my company and we hit it off. She’s wonderful, sweet and brilliant. You’d love her if you knew her.” At least he avoids her eyes as he says this.

Martina quietly scoffs. “I’m sure I would.” Hurling the sponge into the sink, she mutters, “I promised Teresa that we would read tonight. Excuse me.”

Martina--

I’m glad to see you so happy, Augusto. Truly.

Exiting the kitchen, she ignores the way the goofy grin on his face causes her stomach to roll.

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[personal profile] subluxate 2012-01-11 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, Martina. She's trying so, so hard, but...oh, Martina.

At least he tells her once it gets serious. That's a point in his favor.

Very well done.
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[personal profile] sarcasticsra 2012-01-12 12:12 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, Martina.

This says so much in so little.

Great job!
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[personal profile] ce_jour_la 2012-01-12 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
I join in the chorus of "awww, Martina". Love the brevity of this, how much it says without an abundance of words.
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[personal profile] bookblather 2012-01-12 06:01 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this made me choke up. You said so much in so few words; how much it hurts her, but how she refuses to let it show. Really, really well done. The description says so much without actually saying anything.
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[personal profile] shipwreck_light 2012-01-14 02:34 am (UTC)(link)
I love how much conflict and tenderness you managed to cram into such a little fic.