Lotus #20, Scarlet #6

[shadowsong26]

Story: Wishes
'Verse: Feredar
Colors: Lotus #20. Wisdom, Scarlet #6. I'd cut up my heart for you to wear if you wanted it.
Supplies and Materials: miniature collection, pointilism, acrylic, oils, chalk, yarn, glitter, canvas (the first four), frame (the last four)
Word Count: 190
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Lonura
Warnings: Implied parental death
Notes: Constructive criticism welcome, as always. Fun fact: I didn't know most of this until I sat down to write it.


I wish we hadn't decided to keep it secret, because then I might not feel so strange about it.



I wish I could spin fire the way I spin music, so I'd fit into this part of the world a little better.



I wish for sweet music to fill my days and chase away the rumblings of the uncertain earth.



I wish to leave this town at the edges of the mountains, where they stand as mute reminders.



I wish I'd run away to court and met you sooner.



I wish that I could do this better, so I could help you more when you have bad dreams.



I wish I had the words--or the music--to say exactly how much you mean to me



I wish that it could be just us for a little while longer, but I don't know how to ask.



I wish I'd found these words before we fought and I ran away again.



I wish I'd come to you sooner to try and make up.



I have a secret that I wish to sing for you, if you'll close your eyes and listen.

Comments

[kay_brooke]

Poor Lonura. It seems like she has so many regrets, and I feel bad for her.

[shadowsong26]

Thank you.

[bookblather]

This feels rather like music in its rhythm; very appropriate for Lonura. I too hope she gets what she wants.

[shadowsong26]

Thank you.

[clare_dragonfly]

Aww, that's sad and lovely.

[shadowsong26]

Thank you.