bookblather: Mia Maestro pulling her hair back. (Charlotte Hennessy : Mia Maestro)
bookblather ([personal profile] bookblather) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-04-18 01:41 pm

Port Saturation, Red 20: The Hennessys

Author: Kat
Title: The Hennessys
Story: Huge Scary New Story
Colors: Port saturation, red 20 (red tape).
Supplies and Materials: Canvas (the first couple), brush (bedizen), oils (on edge), yarn (the captain's seat), novelty beads (from Kelly: "First of all, a Winchester does not sweat, we perspire. And second...I do not perspire."), pointillism.
Word Count: 865.
Rating: PG-13.
Summary: The Hennessy family.
Warnings: classism, racism, minor sexism, depression, oblique mentions of suicidal ideation.
Notes: So, this is my Huge Scary New Story, which does not yet have a name. I'm going to ask you guys a favor. Huge Scary New Story is huge and scary because it deals mostly with classism and racism, and I am a pasty white upper middle class girl. I'm pretty sure I'm going to fuck some things up. If you see me doing that, please please please tell me so I can fix it. Thanks in advance!

And now, without further ado, the Hennessys.


1. Vintage port/brandy
Tom's father gives him a glass of port on his sixteenth birthday and tells him that now, he is a man; years later, Tom stares moodily into a glass of brandy, and wonders why anyone tells that same old lie.

8. Smoking jacket
Thomas Hennessy always wore a jacket, dinner, tails, or smoking; Christopher, the ignored second son, never does.

15. Leather sofa
He first sees her reclining on a leather sofa, legs long and naked, everyone around her calling her "Elizabeth;" he likes her better in t-shirt and jeans, her hair uncombed and curling, called Isobel.

14. Mink coat
Isobel is wary of Christopher's presents at first, but the mink coat presents possibilities she can't resist, like showing up at his house wearing it and nothing but.

3. Diamonds
The ring weighs down Isobel's finger: she almost asks for a simpler ring before remembering what a triumph it is, and how wonderful will be the looks on their faces when they see her in the Hennessy diamonds.

2. Champagne
Christopher's arm tightens around Isobel's waist as the champagne fizzes gently in the glasses and the frozen smiles of the onlookers turn softly to frowns.

24. This belongs in a museum
It's not that Isobel doesn't love him, it's just that she feels like such a stranger in his world of casual extravagence and museum-quality furniture.

20. The best money can buy.
Isobel proves to be so good at details and negotiation that Harvard Law falls all over themselves to accept her, regardless of her gender or skin, and Christopher is so proud of her that he thinks he might burst.

4. Cigars
"Thank goodness she looks white," his mother says, and Christopher has to put down his newborn daughter, lest his grip tighten too much and bruise her.

10. Velvet
Miranda's new little sister's skin feels like as velvet; darker than hers, but just as soft.

23. It's an old edition.
As Charlotte gets older, Christopher finds himself more and more glad that his father died before she was born-- he knows what the old man would have said about his precious daughter, and he doesn't really want to commit patricide.

17. Lead crystal
There are times when Isobel wants to kill her in-laws with their heavy Waterford crystal; she refrains only by imagining them buried all up to their necks in their own bullshit lies.

18. Maid/butler service
The one and only time Jackson complained about the maid service not cleaning his room, he got grounded for a month.

6. Glass case
If she could keep her children in a glass case, safe from a world that sneers at their heritage and Charlotte's Latina looks-- she should say she'd rather they be free, but the truth is that she would, in a heartbeat.

9. Silk
Charlotte smoothes a nervous hand over the silk of her dress, and tries not to see the stares, tries not to hear the whispers about the dark little girl standing between her much paler siblings.

11. Caviar
Dad fed them cavier once, just to make a point; after the spitting and the water-gargling was done, they all three vowed not to complain about peanut butter and jelly again.

13. Silver service
The Hennessy children have impressive table manners in public, and in private they behave like any other children, pushing, shoving, name-calling and elbows on the table-- it's a sign, Isobel thinks, of good parenting.

5. Swimming pool
Some days Jackson feels so useless and empty that his throat closes over, so he goes out to the pool and swims laps until his arms ache, and tries not to think about how much he's tempting himself.

12. Gilt
Charlotte traces the inlay in the whorls of the chair in their public sitting room, and feels her stomach cramp with guilt.

19. Platinum
If Alec Robinton genuinely expected her to sit down and put up with his bullshit, he's got another think coming-- she's Miranda Hennessy, platinum to his lead, and he take his stuck-up nastiness and stick it where the sun don't shine.

7. Four-poster bed
Jack's bed is huge, a vast expanse of sheets stretching out like a desert; he sometimes wonders if he picks up so many one-night-stands just so he won't feel so lonely.

16. Marble
Miranda loves being the heir to the Hennessy throne, loves the power and the strength and the awe that comes with it; it would be nice to be able to show emotion in public sometimes, but power requires sacrifice.

21. It's not just to look at.
"You can touch, you know," Jack says to the boy, grinning his fool head off.

25. You paid how much for that?
Miranda cannot understand why Charlotte lives the way she does, with her cheap apartment and cheaper belongings, but Charlie's happy, and it's not her place to question it.

22. It's custom made.
There are posed family photos, portraits, paintings, of the five of them dressed to the nines, spit and polish, the image of a rich family; Christopher's favorite is a poleroid from their Yellowstone vacation, all of them making silly faces and smiling at the camera.
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[personal profile] sarcasticsra 2012-04-18 07:42 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm liking this so far! I really love the last section, and I'm very intrigued by all the family members, the kids in particular (by which I mean Miranda, Charlotte, and Jack), and I will definitely look forward to more. Good job!
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[personal profile] isana 2012-04-18 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, man, you can feel the older Hennessy decay from miles out. Miles out. Christopher's a good egg, though, and so far the issues are dealt with wonderfully.
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[personal profile] kay_brooke 2012-04-19 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my, that sadness and tension caused by who they are vs. who they think they should be is palpable. All of these characters are intriguing already. Good job!
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[personal profile] malapropism 2012-04-19 03:15 pm (UTC)(link)
This is excellent. You've got an amazing grasp of language, as ever ("platinum to his lead" especially), and I'm intrigued by this story already. I'm really looking forward to reading more about these characters. Wonderful work. <33

[personal profile] whatawaytoburn 2012-04-20 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
This made me amazingly uncomfortable in the best way possible. I was squirming in my chair at some bits and I don't regret it for a moment. Brilliant, brilliant!
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[personal profile] shipwreck_light 2012-04-23 12:11 am (UTC)(link)
Ohmigod, this story may be scary, but I am so, so interested in these people and their lives! It's a really good introduction. You can taste the tension and the moments of sweetness. You can see this is going places!

I think I like #11 best! I've had that caviar that's supposed to taste like maple syrup already. There are lies and then there are damn lies...

Also, you used my favorite spelling of Isobel.