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Ilthit ([personal profile] ilthit) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2024-01-23 03:15 pm

Iridium #6, Newsprint #8, Psychedelic Purple #24: An hour and thirty five minutes past seven p.m.

Name: An hour and thirty five minutes past seven p.m.
Story: Peccadillo Parlour
Colors: Iridium #6 (cutting-edge), Newsprint #8 (The future is stupid.), Psychedelic Purple #24 (now my life has changed in oh so many ways)
Supplies and Styles: feathers (Britannica's On This Day: 1997 - The Age of Aquarius dawned); fingerpainting, postcard
Word Count: 136
Rating: general
Warnings: A poem about being a teenager.
Note: This is a poem by Reuben Tam Sherman, my character. I have never been to a cricket field, which is clearly the most important part of this poem.



1995 was a year, a logo, a moment.
1997, the dregs of my youth standing over an empty cricket field
thinking I smelled my end in the smog

I had too many words in my head and not enough of them in my mouth
to say what I wanted
in the slow crash towards 1998

not knowing what waited on the other side of my graduation.

Change is an ending; an ending that never ends

no going back to those empty stands
shards on the seating
a busted lamp up above and the memory of its beam
a roar of absent humanity whispering around me

waiting for my mates; a hundred thousand days away.

It's 2001 and I've forgotten
what was so special about 1995.

It's 2010 and I've forgotten myself
three times over since 1995.
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[personal profile] freevistas 2024-01-23 03:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh I really liked this! :)
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[personal profile] freevistas 2024-01-23 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
:D
Glad I passed the test
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[personal profile] thisbluespirit 2024-01-23 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice!

It's 2010 and I've forgotten myself
three times over since 1995.


Tell me about it, says fellow graduate of '95 in 2024. XD
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[personal profile] bookblather 2024-03-28 03:58 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, this is really good! Publishable for sure. And relatable. I didn't graduate until 2006 but I had very much the same feeling of a slow long crash into the future.
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[personal profile] bookblather 2024-03-29 09:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah! You just can't make money from it. Assuming you ever could.