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freevistas ([personal profile] freevistas) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2024-01-01 10:45 am

Teary-eyed #1: Misheard

Story: Without Homeland
Colors: Teary-eyed #1: Misheard
Word Count: 200
Rating: G
Notes: Without Homeland takes places in New London, Connecticut in the 1910s and 1920s. More information and fics can be found at my journal.
This is my first post here...I hope I'm doing it right!

“You probably just misheard him,” Mairead said, holding the Fairchilds’ bedroom rug aloft. “Besides, what’s a…reactionary anyway?”
 
“A counterrevolutionary,” Alba said, giving the rug a firm whack with the rattan carpet-beater. She winced remembering the fragments of conversation she’d caught at the Dramatic Club the night before. She’d been sitting alone, as usual, trying to concentrate on the lecturer on stage–some Galleanist from Chicago–when Angelo and a few of his friends stopped to chat right next to her table on their way to the bar. It had to have been deliberate.
 
Mairead coughed as the cloud of dust began to settle into the grass at their feet. “And that’s…an insult?”
 
“Yes!” Alba gave the rug another whack. “Ever since we broke up, Angelo has done everything in his power to drive me out of Fort Trumbull.”
 
Whack.
 
“But the thing is, he’s the reactionary. All he’s ever wanted is to become one of those prominenti jerks.”
 
Whack!

Mairead gripped the rug a little more tightly; Alba’s pummeling was causing her to lose her grip. “What’s that?”
 
“You know–a big-shot. Businessman. Tycoon.”
 
“And that’s an insult?”
 
Alba gave the rug one last whack before turning on her heel and marching inside.
 
 
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[personal profile] thisbluespirit 2024-01-01 08:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha, very good! I like projecting the anger onto the rug (poor rug, what did it do to deserve it, heh) and you set up some intrguing questions in a very short number of words here.
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[personal profile] bookblather 2024-01-03 05:26 am (UTC)(link)
When in doubt, take it out on household chores!

You're doing things just right; you just need to add tags in future. I've added author, story, and color tags for you, so you should be all set!
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[personal profile] kay_brooke 2024-03-06 01:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry, I'm just now getting around to trying to catch up on reading!

This is very intriguing! I'm interested in seeing more.