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Ilthit ([personal profile] ilthit) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2023-10-24 02:00 pm

Cheese Whiz saturation, Psychedelic Purple #16: All the Lonely People (Peccadillo Parlor)

Name: All the Lonely People
Story: Peccadillo Parlour
Colors: Cheese Whiz (saturation), Psychedelic Purple #16 (look at all the lonely people)
Supplies and Styles: life drawing, miniature collection, photography, pointillism, saturation (Cheese Wiz), silhouette, maybe prototype?
Word Count: 922
Rating: teen
Warnings: Depression, online harassment, sex toy mention, financial troubles, danger, guns.
Summary: Moments of loneliness, moments of connection.
Note: Leave it to me to make a Weird Al saturation whumpy. ✌

Mods, did I do this right? Saturation doesn't count towards a completed color but I need the Cheese Wiz tag.

#1

There was nothing for Reuben on the east coast, so he moved up to Canada and stayed for a while, until the nights got too close and sweaty for reasons that had nothing to do with the weather, and then where was he to go but back south, through places that wanted him dead, chasing an address on an old postcard he'd found taped to the wall of a bathroom, still looking for some distillation of life into a meaningful moment that meant he'd finally be done searching.

#2

Henry didn't call in sick, he just turned off his phone and opened a pack of cigarettes, and watched the daylight slowly turning from one side of his house to the other.

#3

The sound of the chainsaw reverberated through the house, aggression made audible, drowning out words, and sure it was art, sure it was for learning wood sculpture, but it was also to shut Amber up and put her in her place, and it worked: Her place was on his motorcycle, going fast down the highway, his money and his phone in her purse, already forgetting all about his chiseled abs and the past two months in this goddamn hick town.

#4

The sun touched the far horizon, highlighting just how far Jimmy's land reached from his porch, and when his fingers found the strings of his guitar and the first twang startled a chicken, his heart felt almost at peace; almost clean.

#5

Dreams, scruples, compassion, philosophy--Pru shrugged it all away; being a lawyer was just like that.

#6

Holmes, Gordon & Gibbs did not own the entire block, neither was their name written out big and flashy on the side, but once through the double doors the sign listing the companies in this office building made sure you knew: This was the house of Violet Holmes.


#7    

Juliette's forehead creased and she shifted the mouse to click 'delete comment', the sound of the roll, roll, click of her cute cat-shaped mouse the only sound in her apartment; roll, roll, click, again and again.

#8

Anna held on to Juliette's hand, panting through the beating of her heart, telling her she was still alive, still breathing, and she wanted to keep breathing, why is it that you only find that out when there's a literal assault weapon shooting down your door--

#9

It took a while for Phyllida to give up the idea of pretending; really, she had tried so hard for so long, for nothing but pride; silly, really--things were so much better now that she had her place and Chucks had his and neither of them had to put up with the other's nonsense.

#10

It was the only thing Festus disliked about being an antiques dealer: Having to sell.

#11

Henry's kitchen was always clean and always in order, like everything in his life he could easily control, the appliances taken apart and cleaned after every use, and once a month he took down everything and spent a day just going through it all to make sure it was perfect; and if anything had a flaw or a fault that he could not fix, into the bin it went, no longer welcome.

#12

Some people will never be friends, and Pru was sure she and Jimmy never would be--if only he thought the same.

#13

Martin works hard at being a good person but it's not an easy thing; it may be a thing he can never achieve, but that he doesn't say, because people tend to either not believe him, or tell him he's there already; but he's working on it.

#14

Jude lights up another cigarette with shaking hands, draws in the breath and the taste of sulfur from the black candle's flame burning through the dry leaves, and kicks the pile of ashes on the ground for the audacity of interrupting his afternoon hangover.

#15

Tommy flinged back from the apartment door and covered his eyes, but it was too late, he had already seen Cameron's latest carpentry project: a table made out of dozens of artfully intertwined wooden dildos.

#16

Amber had it good, she really did, the man she was with was great and rich and they were having such a good time, but there was--and this is how so many of her stories start--there was this girl...

#17

Henry had a reoccurring dream, which got worse when the weather was hot, of staring down a shimmering small town street at a man whose face was hidden in the shadow of his hat, his hand hovering over the handle of his weapon, and something in him telling him he did not want that man to look up and stare him down with his own eyes.

#18

Cameron's got his best clothes on, thank you spring sales, and he's got a date with a tall-dark-handsome in a business suit, and so the bills can stand a little longer in the little keybowl in the hallway.

#19

Henry can tell Phyl thinks he's all better now that he's dressing up and showing up and yelling at waiters again, just like the old days, and chasing a different tail every night instead of getting hung up, but she should know by now: This isn't better, just different.

#20

Amber's in love, and Jackie is the sun and the moon and the stars, and when she laughs that sooty warm laugh, everything, against all reason or logic, is somehow going to be alright.
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[personal profile] thisbluespirit 2023-10-31 08:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, these are all so sharp and evocative - great work!

(I think you could put it on Amazon as a 15 page booklet and claim to be an innovator in the short art form on the strength of this. XD)
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[personal profile] silvercat17 2023-11-02 03:54 am (UTC)(link)
Looks good to me. And you get the Prototype for Cheese Whiz!
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[personal profile] bookblather 2023-11-27 11:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, how clever! I think you did a great job making Weird Al whumpy. And yeah, like silvercat said, looks good!
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[personal profile] scifirenegade 2025-04-05 06:13 am (UTC)(link)
These little snippets are all very well-written <3