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rainbowfic2012-04-05 01:21 am
bookblather) wrote in rainbowfic2012-04-05 01:21 am
Smile Full of Sin
Author: Kat
Title: Smile Full of Sin
Story: In the Heart
Colors: Daffodil 15 (new beginnings), yellow 12 (yellow fever), red 9 (marlboro red).
Supplies and Materials: Miniature, feathers (this picture), chalk (model behavior), glue (It appears that you're ready to take a risk to get something you want.), reimaging (Stalking).
Word Count: 100.
Rating: PG-13.
Summary: Gina meets Vanessa.
Warnings: none
Notes: I knew something like this would happen with the chalk.
She wore fishnets, and a red dress split to her hip, and dark smoky eyes full of promises that made Gina press her legs together. She leaned on the bar beside Gina's stool, lifted a cigarette to red, red lips, and smiled.
"Hi," she said, exhaling a puff of smoke. "All by yourself?"
Even her voice was amazing, dark chocolate over knives. Gina licked her lips. "Yes."
"Shame," she said, stubbed the cigarette out, and trailed her fingers up Gina's arm. "A girl like you shouldn't be alone."
She was fire, and right now, Gina was happy to get burned.
Title: Smile Full of Sin
Story: In the Heart
Colors: Daffodil 15 (new beginnings), yellow 12 (yellow fever), red 9 (marlboro red).
Supplies and Materials: Miniature, feathers (this picture), chalk (model behavior), glue (It appears that you're ready to take a risk to get something you want.), reimaging (Stalking).
Word Count: 100.
Rating: PG-13.
Summary: Gina meets Vanessa.
Warnings: none
Notes: I knew something like this would happen with the chalk.
She wore fishnets, and a red dress split to her hip, and dark smoky eyes full of promises that made Gina press her legs together. She leaned on the bar beside Gina's stool, lifted a cigarette to red, red lips, and smiled.
"Hi," she said, exhaling a puff of smoke. "All by yourself?"
Even her voice was amazing, dark chocolate over knives. Gina licked her lips. "Yes."
"Shame," she said, stubbed the cigarette out, and trailed her fingers up Gina's arm. "A girl like you shouldn't be alone."
She was fire, and right now, Gina was happy to get burned.
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But this is gorgeously written, all the powerful imagery in such a small space--I especially love "dark chocolate over knives", and that last line! Wonderful job. It gave me the shivers.
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I was trying to convey how dangerous she was and how attracted Gina was to that danger-- I'm glad it seems to have worked. Thanks!