shadowsong26: (taz)
shadowsong26 ([personal profile] shadowsong26) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-03-27 11:08 pm

Angel Cake #12, Celestial Blue #8

Name: shadowsong26
Story: Partner
'Verse: Feredar
Colors: Angel Cake #12. Sing the praises, Celestial Blue #8. the angels sing
Supplies and Materials: miniature, fabric, canvas (980 FY)
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Characters: Taz Hantree
Warnings: None
Notes: Constructive criticism welcome, as always.


Taz took a deep breath before vaulting over the railing and stepping onto the Morning Glory for the first time.

He was brand-new, and while he hadn't been built just for her, it almost felt like he had been. She was his first captain--probably the first person to touch him since the shipwrights finished and he was inspected. He was small and light, shallow on the draft, and would be fast. She could almost feel him aching to move, to start their adventures, as much as she did.

"Hello," she finally said. "My name's Taz. And I'm your Captain."
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[personal profile] bookblather 2012-03-28 09:04 pm (UTC)(link)
That is lovely.

Do the Islanders gender ships male, then?
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[personal profile] clare_dragonfly 2012-03-29 02:11 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I love it! I really get the sense that she thinks of the ship as--not quite a person, but a living thing that she'll interact with rather than just control.

(You have a typo--"valuting.")
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[personal profile] shipwreck_light 2012-03-29 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
Taz. Introducing herself to her ship.

It is so adorable!