Red 19, Tractor Red 2: Sunrise

[bookblather]

Author: Kat
Title: Sunrise
Story: In the Heart
Colors: Red 19 (seeing red), tractor red 2 (the rooster's crow) with Nikki's paint-by-numbers (Summer gets everyone up early to watch the sunrise.).
Supplies and Materials: Miniature, fabric (this endlessly applicable picture).
Word Count: 28
Rating: G
Summary: Wake up.
Warnings: none.
Notes: It's World Poetry Day, and I've been meaning to write a cinquain. This is specifically a butterfly cinquain.


wake up
she whispers and
draws them to the window
sleepy-eyed, complaining, until
seeing
horizon limned with gold and red
gilded sunrise, beauty
too big to keep
yourself.

Comments

[five_steps_back]

Oh, this is lovely. <3 You write poetry awesomely.

[bookblather]

Thank you very much. <3 I'm in a new poetry comm so expect more from me.

[shadowsong26]

This is very pretty. Well done ^_^

[bookblather]

Thank you!

[sarcasticsra]

I really love this, and I can easily see Summer in it.

[bookblather]

It did seem like a good form for her. Very measured and at the same time very open.

Thank you!