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Emotions/Fire Opal 1
Author:
novel_machinist
Piece/story: The Devil is a Gentleman
Theme: Emotions/Fire Opal 1. Desire
Word Count: 633
Summary: Nick falls in love with the Sister of Angels. <3
Ratings/Warnings: PG-13 for naughty, sexy devils… ;) (No warnings)
Notes: Didn't make it all up, tho.
"Oh, Joel," Eloa sighed, twirling her pigtails, "I know we're in human bodies, but we're still angels! If I'm going to make sweet raunchy love with someone, I need it to be pure and special!"
"But you've even turned down your brother angels! Nobody's good enough for you! I'm tired of being friendzoned, Eloa!" Joel stomped off.
Eloa sighed again, a single crystal tear slowly sliding down her cheek. She reached up and dabbed it with the sleeve of her salmon pink sweater set, the primly adjusted her glasses. After that, she tried and tried to shelve the books on her cart, but the walls of the library seemed to be closing in.
Eloa went for a walk, and though it wasn't quite 3pm when she started, it was conveinently close to midnight when she turned the wrong way down a dark alley. Eloa became afraid that some evil demon would come upon her and--hopelessly infatuated with her--try to talk her into going all the way to 2nd base.
Though... deep inside... the idea kind of excited her....
She gasped, clutching her actual pearl necklace when a tall, dark, handsome figure in leather pants walked out of the shadows. "Hello, Eloa, the Littlest, Purest Angel of God's Love."
"Well, golly gee whiz, Mr. Satan!" Eloa giggled nervously, "You really gave me a fright!" She fanned herself, as her cheeks blushed pretty pink like her coordinated outfit. She really hoped he noticed.
"Please.... Call me Nick..." He pleaded, his open shirt blowing in the wind. "Eloa."
"Yes?" She said.
"I've been watching you. For a long time. And no matter how much I wait for you to fall, you never seem to."
"Oh, Nick!" Eloa said, "An angel like me is supported by True Love. I don't fall! I descend, so I can understand people like you that no one else can! Nick, I can transform you, if you would just let me!"
"Oh. Eloa," Nick groaned, "I want so badly to be a creature of love again. I want to love you, but I can't! I'm not good enough for you! I have these..... urges..."
Eloa knew it was only the fires of Hell making him so hot, but that did nothing to dampen her blossoming passion. She began to feel an unholy burn.
"Oh, Nick" She moaned, "Please, take out your urges on me! I'm begging!"
"But Eloa! If I do that, you really will fall! You'll be trapped with me in Hell, forever!" Nick turned away, so she couldn't see the tears in his eyes.
It moved her heart, to see him so afraid of his emotions. She reached out for him, the muscles in his manly bicep rippling under her touch, bare because his shirt had magically disappeared--maybe in the same mysterious breeze that was ruffling his hair. “Don’t turn away--don’t hide your tears! They’re so beautiful to me! That’s what repentance looks like!”
“Eloa…” Nick was moved, too. “I’m so ashamed, though. There just is no way I could ever compare to how wonderful you are.”
“Love can make you wonderful!” Eloa exclaimed, passionately, pushing away from him. “Let me show you my true form!” She took off her glasses and the hair bands on her pigtails. Eloa tossed her head back and forth, her long, stunning, shiny hair going free. It was like she had a total makeover, on the point. She was Truly Beautiful.
“This is what Love does to people, “ Eloa cried out. Nick swept her up in his strong, sexy arms. “Just kiss me, Nick! Kiss me and you can have this, too! I’ll give everything to you! So I can save you from yourself!”
And he did! And they lived happily ever R-rated after!
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Piece/story: The Devil is a Gentleman
Theme: Emotions/Fire Opal 1. Desire
Word Count: 633
Summary: Nick falls in love with the Sister of Angels. <3
Ratings/Warnings: PG-13 for naughty, sexy devils… ;) (No warnings)
Notes: Didn't make it all up, tho.
"Oh, Joel," Eloa sighed, twirling her pigtails, "I know we're in human bodies, but we're still angels! If I'm going to make sweet raunchy love with someone, I need it to be pure and special!"
"But you've even turned down your brother angels! Nobody's good enough for you! I'm tired of being friendzoned, Eloa!" Joel stomped off.
Eloa sighed again, a single crystal tear slowly sliding down her cheek. She reached up and dabbed it with the sleeve of her salmon pink sweater set, the primly adjusted her glasses. After that, she tried and tried to shelve the books on her cart, but the walls of the library seemed to be closing in.
Eloa went for a walk, and though it wasn't quite 3pm when she started, it was conveinently close to midnight when she turned the wrong way down a dark alley. Eloa became afraid that some evil demon would come upon her and--hopelessly infatuated with her--try to talk her into going all the way to 2nd base.
Though... deep inside... the idea kind of excited her....
She gasped, clutching her actual pearl necklace when a tall, dark, handsome figure in leather pants walked out of the shadows. "Hello, Eloa, the Littlest, Purest Angel of God's Love."
"Well, golly gee whiz, Mr. Satan!" Eloa giggled nervously, "You really gave me a fright!" She fanned herself, as her cheeks blushed pretty pink like her coordinated outfit. She really hoped he noticed.
"Please.... Call me Nick..." He pleaded, his open shirt blowing in the wind. "Eloa."
"Yes?" She said.
"I've been watching you. For a long time. And no matter how much I wait for you to fall, you never seem to."
"Oh, Nick!" Eloa said, "An angel like me is supported by True Love. I don't fall! I descend, so I can understand people like you that no one else can! Nick, I can transform you, if you would just let me!"
"Oh. Eloa," Nick groaned, "I want so badly to be a creature of love again. I want to love you, but I can't! I'm not good enough for you! I have these..... urges..."
Eloa knew it was only the fires of Hell making him so hot, but that did nothing to dampen her blossoming passion. She began to feel an unholy burn.
"Oh, Nick" She moaned, "Please, take out your urges on me! I'm begging!"
"But Eloa! If I do that, you really will fall! You'll be trapped with me in Hell, forever!" Nick turned away, so she couldn't see the tears in his eyes.
It moved her heart, to see him so afraid of his emotions. She reached out for him, the muscles in his manly bicep rippling under her touch, bare because his shirt had magically disappeared--maybe in the same mysterious breeze that was ruffling his hair. “Don’t turn away--don’t hide your tears! They’re so beautiful to me! That’s what repentance looks like!”
“Eloa…” Nick was moved, too. “I’m so ashamed, though. There just is no way I could ever compare to how wonderful you are.”
“Love can make you wonderful!” Eloa exclaimed, passionately, pushing away from him. “Let me show you my true form!” She took off her glasses and the hair bands on her pigtails. Eloa tossed her head back and forth, her long, stunning, shiny hair going free. It was like she had a total makeover, on the point. She was Truly Beautiful.
“This is what Love does to people, “ Eloa cried out. Nick swept her up in his strong, sexy arms. “Just kiss me, Nick! Kiss me and you can have this, too! I’ll give everything to you! So I can save you from yourself!”
And he did! And they lived happily ever R-rated after!
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Thank u will rite moar 4 u. <33333
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But i relly luv Nick, lol, like rrrrrrrrrr amirite?
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""Please.... Call me Nick..." He pleaded, his open shirt blowing in the wind. "Eloa."
"Yes?" She said.
"I've been watching you. For a long time. And no matter how much I wait for you to fall, you never seem to.""
I adore you
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You DO love me. You really do.... <3
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There's gonna be a sequel, right?
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Well, of course!!!
*whispers* I broke my brain, please help me....
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(So I actually have serious stories with Eloa as a demon-eating, corrupt-preacher-slaying "fallen" angel but they'd be a total let down after this.)