OK, the bit about Maggie not having a smell? Is really freaking me out too! That's just... it's a really good detail and it's totally unnerving too!
I really wanted something unnerving about Maggie that would be very noticeable. Yes, everyone has commented that, when you look very closely and deeply, her eyes are odd. But someone not having a scent is more noticeable. Plus, it come back in Part 3 of this story in a big way.
And then the story goes on to see her being so chill with the whole THERE IS NOW A VAMPIRE IN YOUR HOUSE situation.
She thinks he's all right because he saved Simon. . .
:) Happy to read that you liked this bit. Stayed tuned for Part 2.
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I really wanted something unnerving about Maggie that would be very noticeable. Yes, everyone has commented that, when you look very closely and deeply, her eyes are odd. But someone not having a scent is more noticeable. Plus, it come back in Part 3 of this story in a big way.
And then the story goes on to see her being so chill with the whole THERE IS NOW A VAMPIRE IN YOUR HOUSE situation.
She thinks he's all right because he saved Simon. . .
:) Happy to read that you liked this bit. Stayed tuned for Part 2.