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Shipwreck Light ([personal profile] shipwreck_light) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic 2013-01-31 04:16 am (UTC)

"My people are strange and clever and funny and we are going to have good sex. I fail to see the problem."

YES.

Gina can't resist the light in Ivy's eyes, the bright happy mischief like sparkles, so she brushes her hand along Ivy's hairline and kisses her, deep and warm, in the middle of the street with their new sex toy caught between them and God and the world watching.

YES.

AND ALL OF IVY'S SEX TALK. ALL OF IT.

I could quote the whole thing back at you. I really, really could. IN THE MEANTIME. The leadup to the porn is so absolutely charming and funny. The waiting and the bouncing and the nerdiness of all kinds. But, more than that, it really brings out how much Ivy and Gina love each other. So, some the sex.

*we interrupt this comment for a cigarette break*

*boing*

*ROFL*

Ahem.

That was smoking how, I hope you know that. I really feel that you captured the act of desiring for Gina, which is something not a lot of porn does, let alone bothers to attempt.

It's lickably good, I must say.

THANK YOU.






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