isana: Makinami Mari Illustrious (mari)
and it travels from heart to limb to pen ([personal profile] isana) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic 2012-10-23 06:49 am (UTC)

The veil as helm is a terrific metaphor. I would never have thought of that myself.

Dawn rather thinks that if marriage was the miraculous cure they claim it is then they might be happy at any given time and not carry daggers in their chests where they have clawed out each other's hearts.

This line. So terrific.

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