Oooh, this really gives me the shivers, how calculating John Hardy is through all this. He's already won the game, pretty much, and all Mr. Wray can do is really writhe on a hook, it seems.
Also, that last paragraph really sums up his motivation tidily while still showing and not telling. Great job!
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Also, that last paragraph really sums up his motivation tidily while still showing and not telling. Great job!