bookblather: Mia Maestro pulling her hair back. (Charlotte Hennessy : Mia Maestro)
bookblather ([personal profile] bookblather) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-09-23 03:51 pm

Sulphur 18, Liver 18: As You Are

Author: Kat
Title: As You Are
Story: Shine Like It Does
Colors: Sulphur 18 (Unclean), liver 18 (skin).
Supplies and Materials: Tapestry, canvas (Charlotte is a child), charcoal (Nancy Hennessy), photography, beading wire (cheetah and cub), oils (don't be so surprised), brush (forsooth), miniature.
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG.
Summary: Nancy is concerned about Charlotte.
Warnings: Racism, racism, racism.
Notes: Someday I'm going to write the fight that erupted when Christopher married Isobel.


Nancy is concerned about Charlotte.

It isn't entirely the girl's fault, she supposes-- Charlotte is quite sweet and very polite, and if she only looked white she would be pretty, in a muted way. The trouble is that she doesn't look white. She has her mother's hard chin and cheekbones, thick eyebrows, and skin just too dark to be passed off as a tan.

If she'd stay inside, if she'd wear dark clothing, if she wouldn't speak Spanish... but she insists, no matter what Nancy says.

It cuts Nancy to the heart, that a girl like that is a Hennessy.
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[personal profile] leia_solo 2012-09-23 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow this was harsh, but very realistic. Good job!
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[personal profile] isana 2012-09-23 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
God, it's like Nancy is a humorless version of the grandma from The New Normal. She's just as bad on the show from what I can tell, but at least it's offset by some mockable lines.

Also, wow, Nancy pretty much just wishes she wouldn't exist, the whole "if she'd stay inside, if she'd wear dark clothing" bit. You can tell she wants to erase her, totally. Great job.
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[personal profile] auguris 2012-09-23 09:24 pm (UTC)(link)
I seriously just want to slug Nancy right now. Well done.
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[personal profile] finch 2012-09-24 12:14 am (UTC)(link)
Good job going into a skin-crawling place like her brain...
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[personal profile] settecorvi 2012-09-24 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
You have a knack for writing loathsome characters while making them scarily realistic. So, uh, kudos on that. :p
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[personal profile] kay_brooke 2012-09-24 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I would love for you to write that fight, because Nancy is just awful. It's like, literal erasure. Ugh.
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[personal profile] shipwreck_light 2012-10-02 04:51 am (UTC)(link)
...this is just a shade schnappisier than Andrew's installment.

Nancy? EWWWWWWWWWW.

I thought you were going to be sweet to Charlotte and this is what you pull!?

Super A+ on the con job though. In all serious!