Thank you!

I really appreciate the feedback on how Dor comes across. She's supposed to be precocious and frustrated out of her mind by the way adults treat her like a mental incompetent... especially after she becomes paraplegic. It's easy for that sort of character to slip over into being obnoxious and too much an Author's Darling, where you kind of hate them just because the author seems so enamored of them, so it's good to hear she hasn't hit that point (yet.)