Sky Blue 10 - Fog Grey 13 - Waterspout 4 - Miniature - Photography - Modeling Clay

[dark_kana]

Name: Kana
Title: The Forest
Story: Shadows in the Distance
Characters: Caithlynn
Colors: Sky Blue 10 Rainbow – Fog Grey 13 Earthquake weather – Waterspout 4 Pond
Supplies and Styles: Miniature – Photography – Modeling Clay (Sky)
Word count: 99
Rating: PG
Summary: Despite the upcoming thunderstorm, she still feels safe in the forest.
Notes: Constructive criticism is, as always, welcome

The forest is the only place that makes her feel… Safe. The trees around her, protective.

It’s half an hour walking to the pond. She often sits there. Just watching the wind move the water. Watching the fish swim freely.

Looking up she notices the thunderclouds. It’s too hot. And too humid. And… She knows it is her imagination, but it feels as if the earth sometimes trembles. There will be a storm breaking out soon. Luckily there is a forest cabin. Strong enough to withstand it.

She wonders if she’ll see a rainbow reflected in the water afterwards…

Comments

[novel_machinist]

I really still like these. I enjoy the oncoming thunderclouds and the tremble in the earth. The end is hopeful too.

[dark_kana]

Thank you!
I always try to end on a happy or hopeful note. Though it doens't always work... ^^;

[bookblather]

That's a nice echo of the story overall (as I can follow it); the oncoming storm and the hope for a brighter future.

[dark_kana]

Oh, you noticed that right! ^^
Thank you!