paradoxcase ([personal profile] paradoxcase) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic 2025-03-09 03:44 pm (UTC)

Ahh, so this is where Chiulder came in. I really like this depiction of the mind control.

One thing that's slightly confusing is that at the beginning, it says

Aima had seen through Chiulder's words, the same as Leion, but she had shattered in front of him; beyond repair.

which indicates that Leion did see through the mind control, but at the end of the piece, he clearly didn't. But I guess that refers to something that happened immediately after the end of this?


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