Oh, this was very interesting, I actually really like all of the worldbuilding details. A couple things, though:

He had been honoured him quite enough lately and he wasn't going to disturb Fern and the kittens again tonight.

Should be "He had been honouring him", probably.

Probably this is just me being unfamiliar with your story, but Eseray seems to be both Viyony's last name and also a placename, which is somewhat confusing. Also, I can see that Imai and Imor are titles, but I'm not sure what the distinction is between them - it doesn't seem to be gender.