Ah, I adore Tuanada's perspective--and I should have written down everything that I was saying a love about your writing, but I'll do my best to summarize.
I really want to see what she has to say, and if you don't write more, soon, I'm going to hunt you down! I love the contrast of Tuanada's POV and Kaitan's, the way that her 'normal' is all that paranoia and suspicion and unresolved anger, and Tuanada's is resigned pragmatism that he tries to offset with carefully precise bits of humour. (He reminds me a little of Tharkay, come to think of it!)
I like seeing how these two started, when Kaitan was still a teen, in contrast with what I know they'll become by the time she's an adult. Knowing they wind up as an inseparable team makes this all the sweeter--I think your writing begins to really take the best shape the more you read of it, so it might be nice to have access to this somewhere that you could keep reading after the first chapter without it being separated by long breaks. There are a lot of places you could post it (DW is convenient, but maybe not the best for reach?) and this has the vibe of feeling worth it to read in nice chunks.
TL;DR: I'd like to read more, and maybe go back to the start to read it in order once you have an arc finished. I know Rainbowfic might be a bit confining for some ideas... but wherever and however you do it, I'd like to read more!
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I really want to see what she has to say, and if you don't write more, soon, I'm going to hunt you down! I love the contrast of Tuanada's POV and Kaitan's, the way that her 'normal' is all that paranoia and suspicion and unresolved anger, and Tuanada's is resigned pragmatism that he tries to offset with carefully precise bits of humour. (He reminds me a little of Tharkay, come to think of it!)
I like seeing how these two started, when Kaitan was still a teen, in contrast with what I know they'll become by the time she's an adult. Knowing they wind up as an inseparable team makes this all the sweeter--I think your writing begins to really take the best shape the more you read of it, so it might be nice to have access to this somewhere that you could keep reading after the first chapter without it being separated by long breaks. There are a lot of places you could post it (DW is convenient, but maybe not the best for reach?) and this has the vibe of feeling worth it to read in nice chunks.
TL;DR: I'd like to read more, and maybe go back to the start to read it in order once you have an arc finished. I know Rainbowfic might be a bit confining for some ideas... but wherever and however you do it, I'd like to read more!