This is long, so I have to read it in sections. I'm going to just comment on each section, I hope you don't mind!

Section the First:

This was really cute. I connected with Frankie, even though he wasn't the speaker and I LOVE the speaker. He sounds like a really good kid. I mean, getting in kid trouble, but he's doing it with his heart in the right place. As soon as I can read more, I'll comment again!